I feel a little unsure about posting this poem directly from my diary, but your best work is the one close to your heart,right?
He hurts me constantly
Does he even know?
My friends thinks its normal
But I'm not really sure
He says somethings cruel
Things ladies should never say
But he's not a lady so I guess
Its ok....
My heart screams constantly
But my mouth stays shut
My heart is aching for a _______ I could trust
Yes, I know im quiet
But can't you see me tears?
Oh,wait your not looking
To comfort mmy fears
Your just my ______
That's exactly what you are.
That's why I hate myself for thinking you are more.
I like it! keep writing. If your scared to be to personal use metaphors instead. your a very good writer
ReplyDeleteThankyou! That means a bunch! So are you, I love your poetry
ReplyDeletewow good poem, don't be afraid to share. I hope you've moved on from this jerk who is hurting you!
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